Joe,
I really do appreciate this constructive criticism, especially when done to
this degree of professionalism not offer in the comments of a few other, who
continue with their insults and name calling. Therefore, it is you who I
will listen to, not them, for you certainly add creditability with your
suggestions.
For the most part, I understand what you're saying. Obviously, while the
information on my Website is pretty much there, it does seem like it needs
some fine tuning. I do hope to get the Pick a Cruise button working soon,
that's why I included it.Your 800 number comment, e-mail address change and
affiliate connections, are all good points, along with adding more of my
license information and personal credentials to the site as well. I can see
that I do have more work to do, especially in reference to your comment
about not having an obvious call to action.
John
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> John,
>
> Some hopefully constructive criticism from a webmaster:
>
> 1) Under Construction graphics are not professional - remove it - its
> understood. If it doesn't work yet, don't put it on the site. Create a
> test area to stage and test your pages before release.
> 2) To be a professional on the web, use a professional email address -
> if your domain is shiptoshorecruise.com, your email should be
> john@shiptoshorecruise.com not something at sprynet.....
> 3) Why is your 800# not prominently displayed? I would call a company
> with an 800# before I make a long distance call.
> 4) Besides the non-functional Pick a Cruise button, and the phone
> number and contact us links, I saw no obvious call to action for anyone
> to fill out a form to get a price from you.
> 5) Are you incorporated? Are you a member of the Better Business
> Bureau? Do you carry E&O insurance? Do you comply with Seller of
> Traveler laws?
> 6) I see the note re: "affiliate of: Advantage Travel Partners", but no
> link to them - how do I get more info on them? (I was able to find this
> info via a google search)
>
> Just some thoughts....
>
> -Joe
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